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Friday, 22. October 2010

@@@@@I told you that you were drinking too
By hendeeke, 03:16

@@@@@I told you that you were drinking too muchI didn't answer her, but I pulled the pack on without taking a drinkMy mouth felt horrible, dry and sandy and tasting of bileI tried to ignore that, tried to stop running my sandpaper tongue over my gritty teeth, and started walkingMy stomach was harder to ignore than my mouth as the sun rose higher and hotter above meIt twisted and contracted at regular intervals, anticipating meals that didn't appearBy afternoon, the hunger had gone from uncomfortable to painfulThis is nothing,Melanie reminded me wrylyI didn't feel like being an audience to her endurance memories right nowI was beginning to despair when the good news cameAs I swung my head across the horizon with a routine, halfhearted movement, the bulbous shape of the dome jumped out at me from the middle of a northern line of small peaksThe missing part was only a faint indentation from this vantage pointClose enough,Melanie decided, as thrilled as I was to be making some progressI turned north eagerly, my steps lengtheningeep a lookout for the nextShe remembered another formation for me, and I started craning my head around at once, though I knew it was useless to search for it this earlyIt would be to the eastNorth and then east and then north againThe lift of finding another milestone kept me moving despite the growing weariness in my legsMelanie urged me on, chanting encouragements when I slowed, thinking of Jared and Jamie when I turned apatheticMy progress was steady, and I waited till Melanie okayed each drink, even though the inside of my throat felt as though it was blisteringI had to admit that I was proud of myself for being so toughWhen the dirt road appeared, it seemed like a rewardIt snaked toward the north, the direction I was already headed, but Melanie was skittishI don't like the look of it,she insis

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